Stefan Lindqvist wrote:
I too feel that the full stops sound/look strange, had it only been one sentence it would have been ok, but the continuation sort of ruins it.
One of the first things i learned though when taking a copywrite class was never to end with one word on a new line, it has haunted me ever since :)
Agreed. Rather than blah blah blah use more people,
it should be either compressed to fit on two lines or break the second line earlier, like blah blah blah use more people.
One other thing, the industry standard part sounds odd, i would personally actually go for the Microsoft Office part (seeing as it´s not really an industry standard as such, only sort of a de facto standard) with the R and TM ofcourse, in my experience people only expect compatibility troubles from MS and generally assume everyone else plays along nicely.
I think it looks and sounds nice as it is, but then again I'm really not that picky. If we could decide on the last tidbits rather quickly so Mattias can have it printed on my expence then we're good to go :-)
I'm leaving in a couple of days, but I will be online again the last couple of days before the show. If the flyer/info-sheet is ready then, it should be possible to find a place to have that printed as well. Hopefully. A black&white version of the flyer that looks ok on a laser printer or copyer as a last-minute-before-the-show-and-the-printing-company-hasn't-done-their-job safeguard would be nice as well. If you get my drift. The table is booked and paid for, I just owe Mattias a beer.